AI robot comes to terms with no longer being human, kills a bunch of stuff and discovers her origins.

Its really annoying wehn something you read has loads of typos. Personally I find it raelly distracting and annoying. It wouldnt' take too minutes to proof read whatever it is and sort out elementary problems such as spelling and grammar.

But in B.EX they have'nt bothered and the thing is literally filled with typos, grammar mistakes and annoying (and sometimes amusing) typographical cock ups.

The very first thing you notice is that basic punctuation has gne out of hte window. Apotrophes are rarely used and often in the wrong place and why cant' people understand the difference between your and you're for fucks sake! Commas are deemed entirely surplus to requirements even on long broken up sentences where they really could do with one for the readers sake so he can take a breath.

But it's the smelling mistakes that are the most noticeable. This leads to several glaring errors, most of them jarring and immediately noticable, even when you're not looking for them.

Don't believe me, here's a direct quotation; "...as he came closer the discussed I felt for him would of shown if I'd had the ability to move my face mussels...". (Issue 4, Page 4, Panel 1)

Do you see what I meen? It's bearly readable and more than a little bit humourous. Face Mussels? What are they? Do you get them from the market at Felixstowe docks?

I know I'm harping on about it but it really is that bad throughtout, and it completely kills any atmosfear stone dead. All that drama, tension and everything else. Dead.

Ok, the CG artwork looks pretty good. The story also starts good and is quite dramatic (although it gets convoluted towards the end).

And I think you could accept teh odd typo. Everyone makes mistakes,, after all.

But too to free per panel? Thats' just, sloppy, and it completely ruins the entire reeding experience. Even if you can't do English well for some reason, you could get someone to read thru it? Couldn't you?

6